tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post5414993006737646107..comments2023-11-28T10:21:47.318+00:00Comments on Paula Martin - Romance Author: Alpha versus BetaPaula Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-42085836058918069772012-05-06T15:54:01.622+01:002012-05-06T15:54:01.622+01:00Yes, intriguing. My one suggestion: take out the w...Yes, intriguing. My one suggestion: take out the word "familiar" in the second sentence. Don't give the reader that yet. Let her wait just a bit longer and figure it out for herself. It becomes apparent soon enough and makes the reading just that bit more interesting. :)Kyoko Churchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10128825713067316233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-57710407827459020762012-05-06T02:49:32.950+01:002012-05-06T02:49:32.950+01:00I like the combo character too.
http://joycelansk...I like the combo character too.<br /><br />http://joycelansky.blogspot.comCatch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-89392718198743665852012-05-04T15:59:47.907+01:002012-05-04T15:59:47.907+01:00Thanks, Erin - so glad you agree about 'alphab...Thanks, Erin - so glad you agree about 'alphabeta soup'!<br />And I do hope you'll enjoy the 'volcano story'! <br />I've forwarded your comment to Jenny, so that she can add it to the comments at the BTS site.Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-12066205881784966662012-05-04T15:27:52.283+01:002012-05-04T15:27:52.283+01:00Paula, I tried to log in on Jenny's site but w...Paula, I tried to log in on Jenny's site but was ridiculed and reviled by the spambot...<br /><br />Wanted to say that my heroes usually end up being a combo, a kind of alphabeta soup, even in the m/m stuff. I, like most modern women, am a little turned off by a guy who sees himself as Alley Oop; and yet I get impatient with a guy who's just TOO yielding.<br /><br />I know I must have left a comment on another site--how I'm looking forward to the new volcanic eruption of your latest novel. It sounds almost as good as Remembrance of Violets, and I look forward to reading it soon.<br /><br />Happy writing! Slán, ErinErin OQuinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00113229623866154645noreply@blogger.com