tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post3426747962894258194..comments2023-11-28T10:21:47.318+00:00Comments on Paula Martin - Romance Author: Six Sentence Sunday Paula Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-88807133200442912192012-10-01T01:54:21.749+01:002012-10-01T01:54:21.749+01:00Great emotion in your six, Paula!Great emotion in your six, Paula!Jennifer Wilckhttp://www.jenniferwilck.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-22378607370826008152012-09-30T22:51:08.785+01:002012-09-30T22:51:08.785+01:00S.J. - as you say, one real heart-rending moment f...S.J. - as you say, one real heart-rending moment for her.<br /><br />Thanks, Ellin :-)<br /><br />Many thanks, Sue - and as you know Paul is in a kind of hell right now. Thanks so much for reading my book.<br /><br />Stevie - if you think this is suspense, wait till next week :-DPaula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-41720561121033143962012-09-30T20:57:30.143+01:002012-09-30T20:57:30.143+01:00You're really ramping up the suspense here.
G...You're really ramping up the suspense here.<br /><br />Great six.Stevie Carrollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02172414866093930481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-49940391943670078172012-09-30T20:08:22.727+01:002012-09-30T20:08:22.727+01:00Well, erupting volcanoes are not a bad substitute ...Well, erupting volcanoes are not a bad substitute for hell. (OK, I've read the whole book, but this was a very powerful part.)Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-19196731603104735282012-09-30T20:06:40.801+01:002012-09-30T20:06:40.801+01:00Terrific six. There's a huge amount of emotion...Terrific six. There's a huge amount of emotion in that six. Wll written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-45144276292558449622012-09-30T19:45:51.212+01:002012-09-30T19:45:51.212+01:00Such a hard moment when you realize what you'v...Such a hard moment when you realize what you've done. My heart goes out to her. Her life is kind of just dangling there now, what will she do? Fab 6.S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-8104200026316586892012-09-30T18:39:38.611+01:002012-09-30T18:39:38.611+01:00Thanks, Sara :-)
Clare - so glad her worry and gu...Thanks, Sara :-)<br /><br />Clare - so glad her worry and guilt came across to you. <br /><br />Joanne - seems like we know how to tug each other's heartstrings ;-)<br /><br />Thanks, Sandra! Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-27085135225275713322012-09-30T17:47:32.287+01:002012-09-30T17:47:32.287+01:00Awww...I feel so bad for her. I hope she gets the ...Awww...I feel so bad for her. I hope she gets the chance to make things right!Christine Warnerhttp://christine-warner.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-21785526569818792202012-09-30T16:46:17.524+01:002012-09-30T16:46:17.524+01:00Oh, she seems so upset! Great emotional six, Paula...Oh, she seems so upset! Great emotional six, Paula!Sandra Renee Pessohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12206247562167014745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-56869106341345417162012-09-30T16:23:08.974+01:002012-09-30T16:23:08.974+01:00Aww, terrific six. I'm really feeling for her ...Aww, terrific six. I'm really feeling for her here. Fantastic emotion. You're very good at that, tugging on my heartstrings. Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-43242815600650561842012-09-30T16:03:15.337+01:002012-09-30T16:03:15.337+01:00Really good tension and emotion. I really felt Lis...Really good tension and emotion. I really felt Lisa's heartache, worry and guilt. Great job :)Clare Davidsonhttp://www.claredavidson.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-41064756799346056702012-09-30T15:50:21.109+01:002012-09-30T15:50:21.109+01:00Love this six! Well done.Love this six! Well done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06059049146764159067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-87267323320074868922012-09-30T15:40:25.087+01:002012-09-30T15:40:25.087+01:00Jess - you're right about feeling guilty now!
...Jess - you're right about feeling guilty now!<br /><br />Sandra - good poiint about karma.<br /><br />J.M. - yes, too horrible to think those might be the last words you said to someone.<br /><br />Sabrina - it's an awful memory for her right now.<br /><br />Thanks, Sherry :-)<br /><br />Jessica - you're right. Not only does she have to face the fact of him being in danger, she has the grief of knowing her last words to him. Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-31073485443199395612012-09-30T15:15:26.882+01:002012-09-30T15:15:26.882+01:00Well, that explains her reaction from last week. G...Well, that explains her reaction from last week. Great six! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-3825463256155850912012-09-30T14:38:22.603+01:002012-09-30T14:38:22.603+01:00I missed no end of SSS but this snippet has pulled...I missed no end of SSS but this snippet has pulled me right into the story. Very powerful.Sherry Gloaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03143365764333974956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-62189780116970046932012-09-30T14:36:02.031+01:002012-09-30T14:36:02.031+01:00Great tension and set for later action. You can f...Great tension and set for later action. You can feel the guilt eating her up insides. Sabrina Garienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-7815648646394743382012-09-30T14:35:33.119+01:002012-09-30T14:35:33.119+01:00That would be a terrible thing to feel, and there&...That would be a terrible thing to feel, and there's no way to console someone about the last words they said to someone. Hopefully, they're not and she'll get a chance to tell him what she felt when she thought that those were the last words she said t him.Great six.J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-4635582676973037952012-09-30T14:33:08.780+01:002012-09-30T14:33:08.780+01:00Love that she's caught a little karma she'...Love that she's caught a little karma she'll have to deal with. Nice job!Sandra Sookoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08864799097052526762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-28117621541854695432012-09-30T13:50:54.086+01:002012-09-30T13:50:54.086+01:00Ah guilt, it always makes for a such an enjoyable ...Ah guilt, it always makes for a such an enjoyable read. Great job, Paula!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-32323820193849242172012-09-30T13:33:04.292+01:002012-09-30T13:33:04.292+01:00Thanks, Tory and K.E. - so glad you're sensing...Thanks, Tory and K.E. - so glad you're sensing the very mixed feelings right now :-) Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-26076569882895455012012-09-30T13:19:31.306+01:002012-09-30T13:19:31.306+01:00Very powerful six! Excellent tension, and it's...Very powerful six! Excellent tension, and it's so clear that she has tender feelings for him as well as her feelings of guilt/horror at what she'd told him. Excellent.K.E. Saxon, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15244003000725142864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5758308854209130362.post-23024471301288485542012-09-30T10:52:15.150+01:002012-09-30T10:52:15.150+01:00Awww, this is heart-rending stuff. Wow!Awww, this is heart-rending stuff. Wow!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17703102405965656616noreply@blogger.com