Sunday, 18 March 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Another excerpt from 'His Leading Lady.' Jess is posing as her twin sister, Lora. At the end of an evening with Kyle Drummond, the director of Lora's new show, they share a sizzling kiss and then Kyle leaves. (For anyone new to Six Sunday, please look back to my previous Sunday posts.)

As Jess went into the apartment, she caught sight of herself in the hallway mirror.

“Oh God,” she whispered as she brought both her hands up to her flushed cheeks.  For a few moments she couldn’t think straight.  All she could feel was Kyle’s mouth, his tongue, his whole body, and a quiver ran down to somewhere deep inside her.

In the next moment her eyes widened with horror.  How could she have let him kiss her like that? 

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33 comments:

  1. Hi Paula. PayPal finally cleared its stupid cheque and I've got the book! Hurrah! Can't wait to read it.

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  2. But it was an awesome kiss though!

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  3. Lol - this sure looks like Kyle is a man who knows what he wants, and how to set out to get it :) Poor Jess

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  4. How indeed? Could it be because he's a total hottie, lol? Great six!!

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  5. How? she saw what she wanted and took it that's how lol

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  6. Sounds like it may have been worth it! :)

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  7. How could she? How could she not? LOL. Great six!

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  8. I foresee trouble in sisterland :) Nice six, Paula--thanks for sharing!

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  9. She may be a little in over her head! Great six!

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  10. Ah yes, the afterthoughts! Very well written, so evocative. Great snippet!

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  11. Yes, but I think the kiss was worth the wrath of her sister. Great six!

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  12. Nice sequel to the kiss scene. That kiss was pretty intense... no wonder she can't think straight. ;)

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  13. Love it...and the moment of realization at the end...perfect!

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  14. Hey, I remember that kiss, and all I've got to say is how could she NOT?!? LOL. This is an intriguing story - I'm loving it!

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  15. Love her reaction to the kiss! Well done! Also nice hook and foreshadowing of conflict with her sister!

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  16. It's good that she has a conscience! ;-) but that's a great hook to end on.

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  17. Jenny - so glad Paypal finally cleared for you! Hope you enjoy the book!

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  18. Lisa - yes, Kyle certainly knows how to kiss!

    Zee - he knows what he wants too!

    Karen - a hottie describes him well!

    Sue - his kiss was more than she'd bargained for!

    Cate - maybe she's not quite sure about that yet!

    Kate - as you say, how could she not, LOL

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  19. Jennifer - thanks! But she's still shocked by her response to him!

    Sandra - And it's going to get worse!

    Guilie - maybe it's not what it seems? LOL

    Janey - absolutely right!

    Jessica - she has still to discover her sister's reaction!

    Veronica - thanks, and more afterthoughts in next week's SSS.

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  20. patonlorraine - she's got a lot of thinking to do now!

    Christine - reality hits her with a bang LOL!

    Sarah - thanks, and there's more to come!

    Angela - thanks - and more of her reactions next week.

    Silver - yes, she's mortified right now!

    Siobhan - thanks! :-)

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  21. Must have been one heck of a kiss. :) Nice six!

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  22. Great six. I could really feel her jumbled emotions.

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  23. Fantastic six. Gotta love a kiss that fuddles the mind.

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  24. Karla - you got it right, definitely uh-oh!

    Sabrina - she'd going to stay jumbled for a while!

    Heather - fuddles - love that word!

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  25. I'm starting to wonder if Kyle knows who she really is!

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  26. Dianne - that's the big question, isn't it? LOL

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  27. Lots of intriguing things going on here! I gotta check out that kiss. :)

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  28. Uh oh, looks like she didn't realize what she was getting herself into! Nice six!

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