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Their kiss deepened as his hands moved down her back, then
round her hips and slowly upwards again.
Her head went back and a small moan escaped her throat as
she surrendered to the delicious feel of his hands through the silky baby-doll
top.
“Not sure I can undo this clasp,” he muttered.
She loved his frown of concentration as he fumbled slightly
with the fastening, but once he’d managed to open it he slid the flimsy top off
her shoulders until it fell to the floor. All the time he was looking down at
her breasts.
“God, you’re beautiful,” he breathed.
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42 comments:
Very sexy and sweet, Paula! This excerpt is flowing, effortless. xoxo
Oh La La!! :)
Very cute, and hot at the same time. :)
Steamy six, Paula!
Nice little steamy scene :-)
Hehe, cute. Yes, I do love their concentration at times like that :)
Aiy yi yi, I love that scene! Great six, Paula!!
Steamy 6 Paula! And seeing a guy concentrate on undergarments is oddly endearing :)
"Frown of concentration" and he still manages to keep his focus on the prize! Nice six.
Beautifully and romantically sensual. Yum!
Sweet and romantic.
Those are such sexy lines. Beautiful six today, as always.
What a sweet and sexy scene! Nicely done, Paula!
Love a man who doesn't let the tricky bits stop him! :) Nice six!
Very sensual, and I loved the emotion in this excerpt :)
I love the fumble detail, that says so much about his character.
Excellent flow to this snippet. Great work!
Wonderful six! There is something so engaging about a hero who's fumbling a bit. Loved the slow build up.
Adorable image! I love a man who must struggle with women's clothing. Delightful six!
I love that moment of awkwardness, where he can't get it undone. Very sweet and sexy snippet. :)
Woot! Love his reaction to her!
I do love a man who is so in love he gets all fumbledy-fingered! Excellent six, Paula.
Tantalizing scene...loved how the hero had to fiddle with the clasp.
Great six!
I love the intimacy in your six! :)
Sweet and sexy. I love it when Jack admits he might not be able to undo the clasp. So good, Paula! : )
Wow, thank you all for your fantastic comments! I'm so glad you like Jack's fumbling with the clasp as I think it's somehow sexier than him ripping the top off her!
Fumbledy-fingered is a lovely expression, Silver!
Sexy but sweet :-)
Lovely! I read and enjoyed this book very much.
Thanks, Lila, so glad you enjoyed it! If you have a few spare minutes, I'd really appreciate a short review on Amazon!
I've always loved sweet romantic interludes like this one. You did a lovely job matching your writing voice to the scene. Lovely job!
Can feel the heat and yet its so tender as well. Nice six. :)
Loved the tenderness, and the passion. :o)
Very sweet and I can hear the passion in his voice as he looks at her. Lovely.
Thank you all, I do strive for passion combined with tenderness in my love scenes since I find that combination far more sensual (and more erotic too) than the wham, bam routine!
This is lovely -- and I also like Silver's "fumbledy-fingers" line. It's a perfect description. :)
His fumbling is the PERFECT compliment to this sensual, sexy six. It makes it so real!
I hope he means more than just her breasts. Hot six, Paula. :)
I wanna be her! Great six.
Thanks, all. :-)
Sweet and sexy. Great six!
yes the clasp action makes it more real
Ah an Excellent six!! I need to find time to read this one!!
Cheers, Jenn
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