Comments and reviews about my romance novels quite often
contain phrases like:’ Couldn’t put it down’ (or ‘unputdownable’ as one person
said!) or ‘I was glued to it’ or ‘Once I started, I had to carry on until I
finished it.’ In fact, one of my readers once ‘complained’ that I had kept her
up late because she had to read ‘just a bit more’ until she got to the end of
the book!
Obviously, these are very satisfying remarks for an author,
but they made me think about what aspects of a novel make it a page turner.
The first requisite, of course, is that readers want to know
what happens next. This means that the plot must be intriguing enough for them
not to be able to guess the rest of the story by the time they get to Chapter 2.
Of course, with a romance novel, they know the hero and heroine will get their
happy ending, but the author must introduce enough unexpected twists and turns to keep readers in suspense and
wondering how that is ever going to happen.
Another important aspect is to keep the story moving
forward. Long descriptions of people and places might be suitable for literary
fiction, but romance readers don’t want to read a whole page describing the
scenery, or the layout of a house or exactly what the characters are wearing
down to the last detail. A short paragraph with well-chosen words is enough to allow
readers to use their own imaginations. Anything more can slow down the action –
which brings me to another big turn-off i.e. irrelevant scenes where nothing actually
happens.
There’s no need to describe the heroine’s shopping trip, or
her day at work, or her cooking or gardening efforts, unless something happens during these events that advances the
story. This may seem obvious, but I’ve read some stories with scenes that add nothing to the story. It’s worth remembering that every
scene, indeed every page, should contain some kind of action or development. It doesn’t
necessarily have to be something dramatic, but there should be a significant
‘something’ that relates to the plot or to the characters. This could be anything
from a major turning point in the story or the introduction of a new character to
a subtle change of attitude or a character learning something about themselves
or the other person or the situation they are in. This applies to conversations,
too. Skip all the ‘Hello, how are you?’ pleasantries and any other dialogue that
rambles on with no real relevance to the rest of the story.
Cliff-hangers are a well-known device to keep readers
turning the pages, especially at the end of a chapter. It’s been said that you
should never end a chapter with a character turning off the light and going to
sleep – because if your readers are reading in bed (which, of course, many
people do) they will probably do the same. You should aim to ‘End each chapter with a bang, not a whimper’! Ask
a question, foreshadow something that is going to happen (without giving it
away), end with a critical moment for one or more of the characters – anything that
will make your readers want to carry on reading to find out what happens next – even though it might be
midnight.
An author can also drop hints during a chapter which make
readers start asking questions e.g. Character A seems to have a hidden agenda –
what is it? I used this in my novel, Irish
Inheritance, which brought this comment from one reader when she was part-way through the book, “I’m dying to
know what …. (no spoilers!) is up to.” There are also times when readers can be
one step ahead of your characters. In Irish
Secrets, for example, the hero is not what he is pretending to be and in Irish Deceptions something is revealed
by the hero which the heroine doesn’t suspect. Hopefully, this makes people want
to continue reading to discover what will happen when the heroine discovers the
truth.
My final point is the characters themselves. Romance readers
want to empathise with the heroine and fall in love with the hero, and the author
needs to ensure that readers get to know the characters well enough to care
about them. This means that they’ll be interested enough to turn the pages to find
out what happens to them, and how they will eventually reach their happy ending.
You've made some excellent points, Paula. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sue - and thanks for visiting my blog :-)
DeleteReally interesting and very useful post, thank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bettina. So glad you found it useful - and thanks for visiting my blog :-)
DeleteThese are great reminders, Paula. I'm in the middle of expanding my current WIP and am trying to be very diligent about making sure the scenes I'm adding actually move the story forward and aren't just filler.
ReplyDeleteFillers are a killer. They can be only too easy to write, until you examine them and ask the right kind of questions. When I was on marathon of reducing words for one novel, I actually realised how much I could delete - a lot of dialogue and even some scenes that added nothing to the story. It was a good exercise that taught me a lot about keeping the story tight.
DeleteA great post Paula. You make some very good points. We all hope to be writing page turners.
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