Saturday, 8 October 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - First Meeting


Another excerpt from my recently released 'His Leading Lady' with the first meeting between Jess and Kyle. This is a continuation from last week when Jess was thrown off-balance by Kyle's abrupt demand.

“Your sister – where is she? I’ve spent the last three days trying to track her down, and then trying to find you

“I’m sorry, I don’t understand.”

Kyle Drummond fixed her with an intense gaze. “Don’t cover for her, Ms. Harper. If your sister thinks she can play silly little games with me, she’d better think again – and so had you.”

More next week!

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Check out the other 'Six Sentences' here

26 comments:

  1. Loved the snippet but really need to catch up and read all the others. This is very intriguing! x

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  2. Ooh a very intriguing six sentence :)

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  3. Great build up of tension between them.

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  4. Great dialogue! Sensational six!

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  5. Great dialogue, I love the tension!

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  6. Thank you all. Sparks are definitely flying between them now! And there's more to come!

    BTW if I haven't left a comment on yout blog, it's because Blogger won't let me. I've discovered over the past week that, if you have a drop-down panel for comments (like this), it usuaully works better for commenters than comments embedded under the post. My handy hint for the day!

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  7. I have to use google crome for some of the blogs

    can’t wait to find out what is going on

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  8. Uh-oh. I think the man means business. Nice six, Paula!

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  9. Oh, my! He's ticked off, but I bet he gets over it.

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  10. He's upset with her sister but taking it out on her? Hope she puts him in his place.

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  11. I'd be a bit ticked off if someone had a go at me because of his unhealthy obsession for my sister. Like Eleri, I hope she puts him in his place.

    J.C.

    Join me in the Trick or Treat Spooktacular! Could you help make the Grand Prize a brand new Kindle Touch?

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  12. Sounds like neither one of them want to budge. Thanks for sharing!

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  13. Thanks again for comments. Jess definitely doesn't get a good impression of him at their first meeting!

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  14. Loved this book. I may just have to reread it again soon! Enjoy your trip to Italy - take lots of pics to share!!!

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  15. Monkey, have scheduled the next 6 for Sunday even though I will be away.

    Layna - the tension will continue!

    Sylvia - thanks so much! Maybe my next book will be set in Italy?

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