Another excerpt from my recently released 'His Leading Lady'. For those who've read my excerpts about Jess and Kyle's first kiss, I'm now showing you their very first meeting. This is a continuation from last week.
“You thought I was Lora.”
The man’s gaze slowly travelled the full length of her body and Jess glanced down at her short peach skirt and her silky cream top. Suddenly she wished it wasn’t quite so low-cut and didn’t reveal so much of her cleavage.
“Yes, you’re definitely twins, but you’re slimmer than Lora, and your hair’s longer,” he said candidly.
Her natural cordiality cooled at his blatant appraisal of her figure. “I don’t like being inspected, Mr Drummond.”
More next week!
'His Leading Lady' available as e-book and paperback from www.whiskeycreekpress.com or from Amazon http://amzn.to/opp1ky
I've been waiting for this all week. Well worth the wait.
ReplyDeleteHmmm. Dicey situation when twins are involved with the same man. Have to keep reading to find out how it turns out. Great six!
ReplyDeleteI think six Sentence Sunday should be renamed to Sixteen Sentence Sunday. Or Sixty... :-)
ReplyDeleteHe better be careful with this twin. She sounds like the kind of girl who'll stand up for herself. Wonderful snippet!
ReplyDeleteGreat six! I like her spunk!!
ReplyDeleteAmy Durham
Ooh, I love twins. Love that icy last sentence, too. Nice 6!
ReplyDeleteI love her last line! Great six!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting six! Wonder what the guy's relationship is with Lora?
ReplyDeleteHa! Love her reply to his appraisal. Can't wait for next week.
ReplyDeleteThese two are going to be fun! Great six!
ReplyDeleteShe doesn't like being inspected? pah - don't believe her!
ReplyDeleteLast week she inspected him, and now he's inspecting her. Seems fair to me! I'm loving their interaction.
ReplyDeletePersonally I LOVE a man who pays attention, but way to amp up the tension. Great six!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for visiting and for your great comments.
ReplyDeleteJess and Kyle have a lot more verbal sparring still to come, believe me!
Of course, if you want to read the whole story about them, the links to 'His Leading Lady' at Whiskey Creek and Amazon are in the left margin ;-)
Fabulous six, I love her comment.
ReplyDeleteCute meet.
ReplyDeleteFun six! I love her spunk. Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteThese two have excellent chemistry, I love the heroine who can hold her own, and he seems like a match for her! Intriguing six!
ReplyDeleteGreat meet up between them
ReplyDeleteHee! Who ever likes being compared? Great six!
ReplyDeleteThanks again to you all. :-)
ReplyDeleteTwins, they may look alike but I bet they're very different. This woman's got some spunk :)
ReplyDeleteHe better check himself. I feel some snaps coming on. Great six!
ReplyDeleteI really like the tension between them... like things are slowly building and then someone's going to blow!
ReplyDeleteAn awesome 6!
ReplyDeleteKathy
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