Sunday, 25 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - First Meeting


Another excerpt from my recently released 'His Leading Lady' with the first meeting between Jess and Kyle. This is a continuation from last week when the last thing Kyle said was: "So how many points did you give me?"

“I beg your pardon?”

“How many points?” he repeated. “When you were inspecting me from the back of the shop?”  Amusement flashed in his eyes. “You must have stood there for a good two minutes watching me.  I could see your reflection in the shop window.”

More next week!

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25 comments:

  1. Carrie Ann Ryan25 September 2011 at 02:32

    Busted! Intriguing six!

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  2. Anonymous25 September 2011 at 02:33

    ohh I love it...how many points I'm wondering now too, and what kind of handsome scale does she use?..he is quite forward ;)

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  3. Sarah Tokeley25 September 2011 at 03:14

    Now she'll be all mad at him, because he's probably right :-)

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  4. Kelly's Mom25 September 2011 at 10:32

    BUSTED! Great six!!
    Amy Durham

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  5. Zee Monodee25 September 2011 at 14:05

    Ouch! Caught in the most disconcerting of ways! Great six!

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  6. Lisa Fox25 September 2011 at 14:29

    Ooo, she got caught! Ha!

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  7. Taryn Kincaid25 September 2011 at 15:38

    Clever fellow. Waiting for her comeback!

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  8. sue25 September 2011 at 16:45

    the test - how does she react? great snippet

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  9. JoAnne Kenrick25 September 2011 at 17:40

    ruh-oh..busted! hehe love it.

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  10. Unknown25 September 2011 at 18:59

    Very intriguing 6! Well done!!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com/

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  11. Paula Martin25 September 2011 at 19:39

    LOL, yes, busted as you all say! They're a good match for each other and the sparks will continue to fly...
    Many thanks for all your comments!

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  12. Marie Dees25 September 2011 at 20:00

    LOL, I do hope he scored well!

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  13. Cara Bristol25 September 2011 at 20:15

    Caught in the act! Fun.

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  14. Gem Sivad25 September 2011 at 20:45

    Oops, caught checking out a hot man. Great six.

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  15. Cherie Marks25 September 2011 at 21:33

    Man, I hate when that happens ;0p Great six!

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  16. Joanne Stewart25 September 2011 at 21:58

    oohhh, she's busted. I can't wait to see her response!

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  17. Cate Masters25 September 2011 at 22:06

    Yikes, busted is right! lol Hm, wonder how many points indeed? :)

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  18. Anonymous25 September 2011 at 22:53

    Oops. Caught in the act

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  19. Sandra Renee Pesso25 September 2011 at 23:20

    She must have stared a little too long! Loved how he calls her out on it. Can't wait to read her response...next week? Great six!

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  20. Unknown26 September 2011 at 00:04

    LOL Busted! :)

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  21. Jennifer Wilck26 September 2011 at 00:12

    Mmm, and he's watching her for at least that long too. Nice!

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  22. Paula Martin26 September 2011 at 00:21

    I love all your comments - thanks, all!
    Next week he makes another demand!

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  23. Anonymous26 September 2011 at 02:35

    Caught! How's she going to talk her way out of this one? And will she give him a low number, when she's thinking otherwise? Very nice. :)

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  24. Unknown26 September 2011 at 02:38

    LOL. Funny that she got caught. Funny that he called her on it. Can't wait to hear what she says.

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  25. 1000th.monkey27 September 2011 at 18:23

    Hahahaha! Busted... now, how's she going to respond?

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