Sunday, 25 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - First Meeting


Another excerpt from my recently released 'His Leading Lady' with the first meeting between Jess and Kyle. This is a continuation from last week when the last thing Kyle said was: "So how many points did you give me?"

“I beg your pardon?”

“How many points?” he repeated. “When you were inspecting me from the back of the shop?”  Amusement flashed in his eyes. “You must have stood there for a good two minutes watching me.  I could see your reflection in the shop window.”

More next week!

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25 comments:

  1. ohh I love it...how many points I'm wondering now too, and what kind of handsome scale does she use?..he is quite forward ;)

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  2. Now she'll be all mad at him, because he's probably right :-)

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  3. Ouch! Caught in the most disconcerting of ways! Great six!

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  4. Clever fellow. Waiting for her comeback!

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  5. the test - how does she react? great snippet

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  6. Very intriguing 6! Well done!!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com/

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  7. LOL, yes, busted as you all say! They're a good match for each other and the sparks will continue to fly...
    Many thanks for all your comments!

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  8. Oops, caught checking out a hot man. Great six.

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  9. Man, I hate when that happens ;0p Great six!

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  10. oohhh, she's busted. I can't wait to see her response!

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  11. Yikes, busted is right! lol Hm, wonder how many points indeed? :)

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  12. She must have stared a little too long! Loved how he calls her out on it. Can't wait to read her response...next week? Great six!

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  13. Mmm, and he's watching her for at least that long too. Nice!

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  14. I love all your comments - thanks, all!
    Next week he makes another demand!

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  15. Caught! How's she going to talk her way out of this one? And will she give him a low number, when she's thinking otherwise? Very nice. :)

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  16. LOL. Funny that she got caught. Funny that he called her on it. Can't wait to hear what she says.

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  17. Hahahaha! Busted... now, how's she going to respond?

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