Another six sentences
from my new novel, 'Changing the Future' which was released
last month.
Blurb: Lisa
Marshall is stunned when celebrated volcanologist Paul Hamilton comes back into
her life at the college where she now teaches. Despite their acrimonious
break-up several years earlier, they soon realise the magnetic attraction
between them is stronger than ever. However, the past is still part of the
present, not least when Paul discovers Lisa has a young son. They can’t change
that past, but will it take a volcanic eruption to help them change the
future?This six comes straight after Lisa has caught sight of Paul for the first time on the college campus and made an excuse to avoid meeting him.
She bit her lower lip as memories constricted her throat,
and then swallowed hard, took a deep breath and squared her shoulders. She
could handle this, she really could.
After all, he was
the one who’d accused her of having an affair and then left her. She had
nothing to be ashamed of, except… A cold finger of fear ran down her spine.
Except she’d never told him about his son.
'Changing the Future' is available at $3.99 on Amazon
Many thanks to everyone who visits my blog each Sunday and leaves such great comments for me :-)
Many thanks to everyone who visits my blog each Sunday and leaves such great comments for me :-)
15 comments:
Ahhh! The plot thickens! I love it!
That's huge! An excellent six! :)
Things just got very interesting and very complicated!
I already started reading it :) good companion for the next travels :)
Oh dear -- there's lots for them to deal with here. :) Nice ending.
Ohh love it! I love these kinds of stories. Great 6.
Nikki
The plot thickens! Great six, great tension!!
Ooo! The plot thickens indeed!
She failed to mention an entire child? This is going to be interesting! Great six!
OOh that's a big secret! Can't wait to read how this ones goes!
Oops. Love "secret baby" stories. She's got some "'splainin' to do". Yes. Yes she does! LOL
Oh, you got me :) except... She better square those shoulders, I see tons of conflict ahead. Well done.
Yes, the subject of the son is kinda major LOL! Excellent tension - great six!
Thanks all!
Dixie - the plot is going to get even thicker!
Jessica - thanks, and yes, it's not a minor detail is it?
Jess - glad you think so!
Claudia - hope you enjoy it!
Donna - yes, they have quite a lot of 'baggage' in their past!
Many thanks, Nikki, K.E. and Lisa.
Kate - An entire child, yes - LOL
Gemma - she had/has reasons for keeping the secret!
Silver - indeed she has!
S.J. - lots more conflict still to come, of course.
Many thanks, Veronica!
Great escalation of the conflict and stakes!
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