Sunday, 11 March 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Another excerpt from 'His Leading Lady.' Jess is posing as her twin sister, Lora. At the end of an evening with Kyle Drummond, the director of Lora's new show, he's just kissed her...

When he released her, her breathing was ragged and she looked up at him, dazed and disorientated.

For a couple of seconds, Kyle looked just as strunned as she felt. His dark eyes stared down into hers before he took a deep breath and gave her a wry grin.

His lips brushed her mouth again in a brief parting kiss and even that burned through her. Still totally numb, she watched as he went into the lift and pressed the ground floor button She raised her hand slightly and, with a small smile, Kyle tilted his head in farewell.

'His Leading Lady' is available this month at 99 cents, as part of Whiskey Creek Press's 9th birthday celebrations, with 9 books for 99 cents each. You can buy it from the WCP website at http://bit.ly/rkTX0h

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33 comments:

  1. Jessica E. Subject11 March 2012 at 02:33

    What's she going to do now? And what would her sister say? Great six to share! :)

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  2. Lisa Fox11 March 2012 at 12:42

    That sounds like quite a kiss!

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  3. Sandra Sookoo11 March 2012 at 13:32

    Wonder what she'll do now? Nice six!

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  4. Anonymous11 March 2012 at 13:49

    Oh, I want him to come back! Great kiss and six!

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  5. Anonymous11 March 2012 at 14:11

    Great kiss and nice setup for future conflict! What will the sister think? And what will he, when he finds out??

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  6. Zee Monodee11 March 2012 at 14:26

    This was beautiful! I felt right there in that scene with her :)

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  7. Christine Warner11 March 2012 at 14:45

    Whew...nice kiss...great six :)

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  8. K.E. Saxon, Author11 March 2012 at 15:15

    What heat! Loved this! Great six, Paula =D

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  9. Silver James11 March 2012 at 15:26

    Wow, Paula! What a great set up for the conflict that's sure to follow. Well played, lady!

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  10. Anonymous11 March 2012 at 16:07

    Wait, he just walked away?! TEASE. *insert Arnold saying, "I'll be back."*

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  11. Paula Martin11 March 2012 at 16:08

    Thank you, all - and yes, he walks away, but of course he WILL be back! Meantime, Jess has some thinking to do - come back next week!

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  12. Gem Sivad11 March 2012 at 16:15

    Wonder if he's sampled Lora and found Jess much more to his taste. Wonderful plot possibilities.

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  13. Paula Martin11 March 2012 at 16:16

    You could also wonder if he actually knows which twin he was kissing, Gem - LOL!

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  14. Joanne Stewart11 March 2012 at 16:24

    Very intriguing! I've got a million questions. Like when he's going to figure out she's not her sister. And what he's going to say. And what her sister's going to say. And.... Good thing this is on my TBR pile. ;) Great six!

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  15. Paula Martin11 March 2012 at 16:28

    All your questions will be answered when you read the book, Joanne :-) Thanks for buying it!

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  16. gemma parkes11 March 2012 at 16:35

    I think he could tell something was amiss! Loved this playful six!

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  17. Linda Morris11 March 2012 at 16:57

    Nice six! Leaves me wondering what happens next.

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  18. Babette James11 March 2012 at 17:35

    Great six! Love that little stunned moment between them.

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  19. Anonymous11 March 2012 at 17:39

    Well, that's some exit! Nicely done!

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  20. Veronica Scott11 March 2012 at 18:18

    Love the effect they have on each other, very hot. Terrific excerpt!

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  21. Kate11 March 2012 at 18:39

    He left? After that he left? More please.

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  22. Sabrina Garie11 March 2012 at 18:47

    Wonderful six. The attraction deepens.

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  23. Siobhan Muir11 March 2012 at 19:00

    Whoa, knocked his socks off. Fun six, Paula. :)

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  24. Monica Enderle Pierce11 March 2012 at 19:01

    Ah, guys and their bravado. He's not gonna stay away for long!

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  25. Paula Martin11 March 2012 at 19:37

    Thanks, all - the magnetic attraction is there, but will they try to deny it?

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  26. Sandra Renee Pesso11 March 2012 at 20:51

    Oh boy! She's playing a dangerous game! Sensational six!

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  27. Janey Falls11 March 2012 at 22:42

    Ha I love this idea!! Great description of the kiss... definitely left me wanting more.

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  28. diannehartsock11 March 2012 at 22:53

    Oh Kyle... What's he going to do now?

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  29. Ruthie12 March 2012 at 00:11

    Love that he's just as stunned as she is!

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  30. Unknown12 March 2012 at 01:50

    Great six. Made me want to kiss someone. :)

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  31. Sarah Ballance12 March 2012 at 02:07

    Oooh, does he know? I love this! It's so, so sexy!

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  32. Kate12 March 2012 at 03:10

    I know, why is he walking away? What's his deal? Very intriguing. Great six!

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  33. Sherry Gloag12 March 2012 at 15:42

    You drew me in not only with the kiss itself but thiking about the upcoming consquences when he finds out she deceived him.

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