Six more
sentences from ‘Changing the Future’.
For those who have been following my previous excerpts, we’re now three
chapters before the end.
Paul is in
Iceland, and Lisa has just heard about the eruption of Mount Lakuda. Now she’s
watching the television in the college cafeteria, desperate for any news about
him. A spokesperson from the Volcano Research Centre is being interviewed about
the team who were at the observation post on the south flank of the volcano and
has explained that contact was lost with them just after the eruption began.
“How many scientists
are at the observation post?”
“Four.”
“Including
the Director of the Research Centre, Kristjan Dagsson, I understand.”
“Yes, Dr.
Dagsson joined the team earlier this week, together with Dr. Paul Hamilton who
arrived here last Sunday.”
“Dear God,
no.” The words slipped involuntarily from Lisa, and she swayed as the room
swirled around her.
Blurb: Lisa Marshall is stunned when celebrated volcanologist Paul
Hamilton comes back into her life at the college where she now teaches. Despite
their acrimonious break-up several years earlier, they soon realise the
magnetic attraction between them is stronger than ever. However, the past is
still part of the present, not least when Paul discovers Lisa has a young son.
They can’t change that past, but will it take a volcanic eruption to help them
change the future?
'Changing the Future' is available at $3.99 on Amazon
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for all your comments each week!
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Such a reaction! I'm thinking she needs some serious closure, here.
ReplyDeleteOh, what's going to happen next? I hope they're okay. Great six! :)
ReplyDeletePoor woman, just when she felt in control of her emotions!
ReplyDeleteThree words from her and you have my heart in my throat, Paula! Fantastic six!
ReplyDeleteThat reaction followed by her dialogue is excellent! Totally felt it myself. Great six!!!
ReplyDeleteI mean the other way around--my blood sugar's getting low: need breakfast, LOL!!
ReplyDeleteSarah - this is just the beginning of the nightmare for her!
ReplyDeleteJessica - it'll get worse before it gets better ;-)
Gemma - a whole gamut of emotions now awaits her!
Joanne - a heart-stopping moment for her - and you too?
K.E. Thanks - and I knew what you meant! :-)
Oh, that horrible feeling when you get bad news!
ReplyDeleteSounds like an action-packed, emotional book :-)
ReplyDeleteSurely Paul is alright! Isn't he? :-/
ReplyDeleteAnother great six...loved how you hooked us at the end. Can't wait for next week :)
ReplyDeleteWay to entice the reader with a cliff-hanger!
ReplyDeleteCara - And the news will get worse ...
ReplyDeleteSandra - there've been some tense moments culminating in this volcano eruption.
J.C. - things will get worse!
Christine and Taryn - glad you like the cliffhanger LOL!
She still cares! But we knew that. ;) Another great snippet, Paula. Way to ramp up the tension.
ReplyDeleteOh no! What a terrible way to discover such news too! Poor Lisa!
ReplyDeletebut they will improve - horrid moment and you portrayed it so well
ReplyDeleteOh, this is a great way for her to realize what's really important. Great six, Paula. :)
ReplyDeletePoor Lisa! Great job of showing her emotion. I really hope Paul manages to survive.
ReplyDeleteI really want to read this book!
ReplyDeleteSilver - yes, indeed, but she still has some soul-searching to do.
ReplyDeleteClaire - very true, and it gets worse too!
Sue - thanks, I think I was living through the moment with her!
Siobhan - yes, exactly!
Thansk, Clare. There'll be more about Paul next week ;-)
Jen - it's there on Amazon ;-)
Love that reaction, so perfect for a woman hiding her feelings from herself.
ReplyDeleteWell, that seems to have taken care of her illusion she doesn't want anything to do with him.
ReplyDeleteLoved the reaction... Great six!
ReplyDeleteSara's right, her reaction is spot on. I suspect a great deal of soul searching in Lisa's immediate future. Outstanding six this week!
ReplyDeleteSO intense, I really feel her emotion in this six - terrific excerpt as always!
ReplyDeleteExcellent 6! Congrats on your release! :)
ReplyDeleteS.J. - thanks, she has a lot of different emotions to face now!
ReplyDeleteSue - yes indeed- nothing like a bit of danger to make you realise how you feel!
Thanks, Sara and Jess - and yes, a whole lot of soul-searching!
Many thanks, Veronica and Karen :-)
Fun six. I love Iceland and vulcanology as the background. Adds the whole ambiance of the story.
ReplyDeleteWonderful ramping up of the tension there.
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Paula. I thought this scene was excellent.! Good book...
ReplyDeleteSabrina - I really enjoyed researching Iceland and volcanoes!
ReplyDeleteStevie and Teresa - many thanks!
Oh, no. Terrifying news!
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