So here's another six from my recent release Fragrance of Violets. Abbey has joined Jack for a weekend in Paris but he knows she's still uncertain about their relationship. While she's in the bedroom getting changed, he convinces himself he'll have to take things slowly with her. But he's in for a surprise.
“So how do I look?”
Her voice broke into his thoughts and he looked round, then did a double-take at her.
She stood in the doorway, her hand reaching up the doorframe as she stood in the most provocative, seductive pose that exceeded even his wildest fantasy.
She’d let her hair loose so that it cascaded past her shoulders in a delightfully unruly mass. Her red chiffon jacket only partly covered her beautiful breasts and, fastened with just one clasp underneath them, offered a tantalising glimpse of the g-string below.
“Wow!” was all he could say.
'Fragrance of Violets' is available from Whiskey Creek Press and Amazon. If you'd like to find out more about the Lake District, where most of this contemporary romance of forgiveness and renewed love is set, do look back at my A-Z posts for this first week of April.
ooh nice n' saucy!
ReplyDeleteWell! he's got that right :-) Wow! great six. Glad to went for the SSS after all.
ReplyDeleteHope you're having a great w.end.
Wow is right! Great six and love the cover!
ReplyDeleteThe heat is rising! Love it! Great 6 :)
ReplyDeleteThat's enough to melt the chocolate in my Easter basket! ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, all! Definitely a 'wow' moment for him - and of course it's going to get hotter ;-)
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt :)..
ReplyDeleteWant to thank you for your kind words on my posts every day, Paula. Appreciate it.
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teehee, loved that she turned the tables on him and surprised him!
ReplyDeleteNice six. I like a man of few words. I'll have to get a closer look.
ReplyDeleteCora Blu
Very nice!
ReplyDeleteOhh, love it. Guess she's firmly decided then. ;) I love that cover, BTW.
ReplyDeleteWow is right :) Looks like Jack is about to enjoy his surprise. Great six!
ReplyDeleteThank you, all - and yes, Jack is definitely going to enjoy his surprise!
ReplyDeleteSurprises can be such nice things. Great six, Paula!
ReplyDeleteWow! Is all I can say too! Hot six! Loved it! Now I have to read that book! Thanks, Paula.
ReplyDeleteLol, poor guy! He's in a predicament, all right. :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you decided to post - SSS is addictive, innit?
LOL...I can't believe he managed to get WOW out...
ReplyDeleteThis is going somewhere fun...hope you follow it up next week right where you left off this week :)
Wow about covers it - excellent description
ReplyDelete"Wow!" indeed! Way to ramp it up, Paula.
ReplyDeleteLOL I don't think she wants to take things slowly. Nice six! :)
ReplyDeleteI love his reaction. I'd say she does too. Great six!
ReplyDeleteGood that he's thinking of her needs - perhaps he needs to up the ante a little. Fun six, Paula. :)
ReplyDeleteI really like this set up! Very descriptive and seductive - great six!
ReplyDeleteVery nice surprise. It's always fun when the hero is trying to be a gentleman and the heroine upsets his intentions. Great six. :)
ReplyDeleteOh...painted a great picture! Well done. :-)
ReplyDeleteI felt the same way you did about the SSS this week after the AtoZ first week rush. :-)
Wow, I'm away from the computer for a couple of hours, and come back to lots more comments from you - thank you so much, I'm delighted you all liked this snippet!
ReplyDeleteKate - it was definitely a nice surprise for Jack!
Dixie - hope you enjoy it when you read it all!
Zee - I don't think he minds the predicament! And yes, I thought I was going to have a rest today after blogging all week, but SSS is addictive!
Christine - you're right, some fun will follow - next week!
Sue and Sylvia - thanks!
Jessica - she's finally made up her mind about Jack, so you're right, she doesn't want to take it slowly any longer!
Cherie - yes, she knows excactly what she's doing!
Siobhan - he's definitely going to do that now!
Elyse - many thanks!
Babette - especially when it's the last thing he expects!
Thanks, Teresa - and yes, after the first week of A-Z, I've got into the habit of blogging every day!
LOL. Yes, he did get a surprise! Great description, Paula! It's no wonder he can only manage one syllable. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lorraine - yes, it was the last thing he expected!
ReplyDeleteoh steamy and she just upset his rhythm completely. wtg Abbey.
ReplyDeletelol I loved his reaction. The one word did say it all. :)
ReplyDeleteWell she knows how to make an entrance! Bet slow isn't going to be in his vocabulary any more. LOL Great six!
ReplyDeleteNot only are these a wonderful six sentences, but also a reminder of the fun I'm no longer having by participating in this challenge.
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Yes, those are the perfect 6 sentences from your delightful novel. I hope you hit the top of the hit parade with it. Now I'm waiting for you to write the Sagas, How about that charming village you feature on your FB page as a starting point? You could call your book Hawkshead (that in itself is an evocative word).
ReplyDeleteSlán and all the best, Erin
Suzy - he's soon going to find his rhythm LOL
ReplyDeleteKaren - the only word he COULD say?
Jenna - you're right!
Joyce - there's alwats next week to start participating again!
Erin - the idea of the Rycroft saga is resfusing to leave my mind LOL! Maybe one day ...