Sunday, 22 April 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Six more from my contemporary romance 'Fragrance of Violets', continued from last week when Abbey surprised Jack in their Paris hotel room by appearing in a see-through baby-doll outfit.


Their kiss deepened as his hands moved down her back, then round her hips and slowly upwards again. 

Her head went back and a small moan escaped her throat as she surrendered to the delicious feel of his hands through the silky baby-doll top.

“Not sure I can undo this clasp,” he muttered. 

She loved his frown of concentration as he fumbled slightly with the fastening, but once he’d managed to open it he slid the flimsy top off her shoulders until it fell to the floor. All the time he was looking down at her breasts. 

“God, you’re beautiful,” he breathed.

'Fragrance of Violets' is available from Whiskey Creek Press and Amazon.

If you'd like to find out more about the Lake District, where most of this contemporary romance of forgiveness and renewed love is set, do look back at my A-Z Blog Challenge posts for April.

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42 comments:

  1. Unknown22 April 2012 at 11:04

    Very sexy and sweet, Paula! This excerpt is flowing, effortless. xoxo

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  2. Tracy22 April 2012 at 11:21

    Oh La La!! :)

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  3. Jessica E. Subject22 April 2012 at 13:05

    Very cute, and hot at the same time. :)

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  4. Kate22 April 2012 at 13:06

    Steamy six, Paula!

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  5. Sandra Sookoo22 April 2012 at 13:36

    Nice little steamy scene :-)

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  6. Skye Warren22 April 2012 at 14:11

    Hehe, cute. Yes, I do love their concentration at times like that :)

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  7. K.E. Saxon, Author22 April 2012 at 16:01

    Aiy yi yi, I love that scene! Great six, Paula!!

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  8. Anonymous22 April 2012 at 16:13

    Steamy 6 Paula! And seeing a guy concentrate on undergarments is oddly endearing :)

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  9. Kate22 April 2012 at 16:16

    "Frown of concentration" and he still manages to keep his focus on the prize! Nice six.

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  10. Anonymous22 April 2012 at 16:39

    Beautifully and romantically sensual. Yum!

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  11. Cara Bristol22 April 2012 at 16:40

    Sweet and romantic.

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  12. Gem Sivad22 April 2012 at 16:51

    Those are such sexy lines. Beautiful six today, as always.

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  13. Sandra Renee Pesso22 April 2012 at 16:54

    What a sweet and sexy scene! Nicely done, Paula!

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  14. Sarah W22 April 2012 at 16:57

    Love a man who doesn't let the tricky bits stop him! :) Nice six!

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  15. Zee Monodee22 April 2012 at 17:05

    Very sensual, and I loved the emotion in this excerpt :)

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  16. Elin Gregory22 April 2012 at 17:14

    I love the fumble detail, that says so much about his character.

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  17. Cate Masters22 April 2012 at 17:28

    Excellent flow to this snippet. Great work!

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  18. Karyn Good22 April 2012 at 17:40

    Wonderful six! There is something so engaging about a hero who's fumbling a bit. Loved the slow build up.

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  19. Wildcats Wife22 April 2012 at 17:48

    Adorable image! I love a man who must struggle with women's clothing. Delightful six!

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  20. Joanne Stewart22 April 2012 at 17:50

    I love that moment of awkwardness, where he can't get it undone. Very sweet and sexy snippet. :)

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  21. D Carney22 April 2012 at 17:50

    Woot! Love his reaction to her!

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  22. Silver James22 April 2012 at 18:23

    I do love a man who is so in love he gets all fumbledy-fingered! Excellent six, Paula.

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  23. Karen Michelle Nutt22 April 2012 at 19:06

    Tantalizing scene...loved how the hero had to fiddle with the clasp.
    Great six!

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  24. patonlorraine22 April 2012 at 19:29

    I love the intimacy in your six! :)

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  25. Tina22 April 2012 at 19:55

    Sweet and sexy. I love it when Jack admits he might not be able to undo the clasp. So good, Paula! : )

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  26. Paula Martin22 April 2012 at 20:07

    Wow, thank you all for your fantastic comments! I'm so glad you like Jack's fumbling with the clasp as I think it's somehow sexier than him ripping the top off her!
    Fumbledy-fingered is a lovely expression, Silver!

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  27. Sherry Gloag22 April 2012 at 20:46

    Sexy but sweet :-)

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  28. Lila Shaw22 April 2012 at 21:53

    Lovely! I read and enjoyed this book very much.

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  29. Paula Martin22 April 2012 at 22:01

    Thanks, Lila, so glad you enjoyed it! If you have a few spare minutes, I'd really appreciate a short review on Amazon!

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  30. Jess Schira22 April 2012 at 22:03

    I've always loved sweet romantic interludes like this one. You did a lovely job matching your writing voice to the scene. Lovely job!

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  31. Ileandra Young22 April 2012 at 23:00

    Can feel the heat and yet its so tender as well. Nice six. :)

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  32. Aimee Duffy22 April 2012 at 23:45

    Loved the tenderness, and the passion. :o)

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  33. diannehartsock23 April 2012 at 00:00

    Very sweet and I can hear the passion in his voice as he looks at her. Lovely.

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  34. Paula Martin23 April 2012 at 00:20

    Thank you all, I do strive for passion combined with tenderness in my love scenes since I find that combination far more sensual (and more erotic too) than the wham, bam routine!

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  35. Donna Cummings23 April 2012 at 01:23

    This is lovely -- and I also like Silver's "fumbledy-fingers" line. It's a perfect description. :)

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  36. Sarah Ballance23 April 2012 at 02:25

    His fumbling is the PERFECT compliment to this sensual, sexy six. It makes it so real!

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  37. Siobhan Muir23 April 2012 at 04:38

    I hope he means more than just her breasts. Hot six, Paula. :)

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  38. Unknown23 April 2012 at 05:19

    I wanna be her! Great six.

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  39. Paula Martin23 April 2012 at 09:24

    Thanks, all. :-)

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  40. Anonymous23 April 2012 at 15:41

    Sweet and sexy. Great six!

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  41. sue23 April 2012 at 17:53

    yes the clasp action makes it more real

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  42. Jenn27 April 2012 at 09:58

    Ah an Excellent six!! I need to find time to read this one!!

    Cheers, Jenn
    http://www.wine-n-chat.com

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